I love the tilt from then to now and the penultimate line "she looks up to see herself" leaving me there to linger between that one and the next with that underscore or dash serves like a sort of bench, a place for the reader to also sit in the in between.
I love the tilt from then to now and the penultimate line "she looks up to see herself" leaving me there to linger between that one and the next with that underscore or dash serves like a sort of bench, a place for the reader to also sit in the in between.
Ooh...that's beautiful...and painful. 💜